Her pal tujhe dekhne ki tamanna, dil he mein reh jaati hai,
Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Jab bhi teri baat chhide, sakhiyaan mujhe chidhaati hain,
Chehre per halki muskaan, aur palkein sherm-saar ho jaati hain,Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Jab bhi teri awaaz sunu, dhadkane badh jaati hain,
Palkein meri uthker tujhe, dekhne se katraati hain,Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Jab bhi auron ki tareef, tere labon per aati hai,
Dil mein koi dard utha, aankhein yahi batlaati hain,Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Jab shyam dhale aur deed ko tere, meri nazrein paana chahti hain,
Bina neend aankhon mein liye, palkein band ho jaati hain,Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Jab bhi tera rukh karun, ke aaj suna doon dil ki baat,
Nakaam koshish per meri, palkein nami chalkaati hain,Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Jab bhi aisa hota hai her baat khatm ho jaati hai,
Agle din phir deed per tere, ek aas nahi bandh jaati hai,Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Phir palkon mein khwabon ki, baraat nayi saj jaati hai,
Phir tujhe apna banane ki ummeed hamein mil jaati hai,
Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
Yeh palkein bhi, dagaa de jaati hain...
your writing is a mirror to real life scenario and credits goes to your fantastic imagination. Keep reflecting the originality.
ReplyDeletedonno wat shud i write so that it can truly justify ur poem (mera imagination daga de jaata hai...[:D][:P])
ReplyDeleteIts great and lukin at the business point of view world has startd appreciating, awsome poetry, great works of art, n related things which require a lot of aesthetic sense to undrstnd... u continue with ur passion to write romantic poetry and soon we'll design a business model to reap the seeds...[;)]
Cheers n al d bst..
~~Macky
hey greva,
ReplyDeletethis really is ingenious work. Such originality, purity of thoughts, and use of words is always that makes a poem wonderful. Both your poems play with the heart of the reader and the rhythm of the poems is absolutely amazing.
kya ho gaya hai tujhe....
ReplyDeleteGulzar aur Javed sab bhi padhkar kahenge...
wah-wah.......
aahye haahye grevu kya ulti poem likhi he ....... sahi me ye to wahi imagine kar sakta he jisne in feelings ko mehsoos kiya ho ..... ..
ReplyDeletekeep u'r creative writing goin on dear:)
sahi likhti hai yaar tu to.....
ReplyDeletegud hai yaar....i lykd d 1st half spcly..... cheers!!
One of my blog friends read ur poem, liked it & wanted to comment but was getting an error...He has asked me to post this comment on his behalf:
ReplyDelete“Beautiful peom Mam…Lovely..Could feel every line…"
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Priyam
Palkein meri, dagaa de jaati hain...
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